And 2021 is off to a flying start! Not only is Angela in, whether she wants to be or not (and not having a choice is just going to "thrill" her), but now, given Jade’s dictum, Elaine MUST not be told/find out about Doris. I can’t wait to see how you’re going to tie the characters AND we your readers into knots, MZ Happy New Year! 🙂
Angela now being brought on against her will is interesting, Elaine potentially being part of this now comes with risks, especially since we know she’ll be leaving in a bit which means she’ll find out maybe either when she returns or before she leaves, either way would be interesting.
It still amazes me that this whole story started off as just a few panels of a guy putting on a body suit for fun and then got a short backstory that didn’t go to far into details, and now we have government agents involved.
Let this be a lesson to you story writers, You don’t have to have to have all your eggs in one basket at the start. you can begin your story small and gradually work up with your ideas, and if possible even getting help from friends for input can lead to your story being more focus and well…*points to this story*
Damn this is about to get serious. if they fuck it up again it’s over no more Doris Lang. I’m sure Kevin has learned his mistake he’ll make sure to check if there’s somebody before suiting up and once there’s nobody around he should be good. I wonder how this story leads I think Elaine will probably find out Kevin was Doris Lang eventually well I think they are being watched, if they found out Kevin, Miranda and Owen failed again then they’re going to destroy the suit but idk how I do think she has full control of the bodysuit or to call all units to go after Kevin to take the suit away from him and destroy it and Kevin being chased. Those are my theories who knows what’s gonna happen and we’re gonna find out in the future, I really can’t wait I need more to come!
And 2021 is off to a flying start! Not only is Angela in, whether she wants to be or not (and not having a choice is just going to "thrill" her), but now, given Jade’s dictum, Elaine MUST not be told/find out about Doris. I can’t wait to see how you’re going to tie the characters AND we your readers into knots, MZ Happy New Year! 🙂
and as they say "The Plot THICC’Ns"
Angela now being brought on against her will is interesting, Elaine potentially being part of this now comes with risks, especially since we know she’ll be leaving in a bit which means she’ll find out maybe either when she returns or before she leaves, either way would be interesting.
It still amazes me that this whole story started off as just a few panels of a guy putting on a body suit for fun and then got a short backstory that didn’t go to far into details, and now we have government agents involved.
Let this be a lesson to you story writers, You don’t have to have to have all your eggs in one basket at the start.
you can begin your story small and gradually work up with your ideas, and if possible even getting help from friends for input can lead to your story being more focus and well…*points to this story*
Don’t be afraid to just start
Miranda: Though I wonder how that girl Angela will react to getting a job she didn’t apply for.
(1 hour later, 3 pages in)
Angela: getting paid to keep my mouth shut. fuck yeah. (sips a drink)
I wonder if Doris might run into someone else with a similar type of bodysuit but it’s wearer was female inside.
Damn this is about to get serious. if they fuck it up again it’s over no more Doris Lang. I’m sure Kevin has learned his mistake he’ll make sure to check if there’s somebody before suiting up and once there’s nobody around he should be good. I wonder how this story leads I think Elaine will probably find out Kevin was Doris Lang eventually well I think they are being watched, if they found out Kevin, Miranda and Owen failed again then they’re going to destroy the suit but idk how I do think she has full control of the bodysuit or to call all units to go after Kevin to take the suit away from him and destroy it and Kevin being chased. Those are my theories who knows what’s gonna happen and we’re gonna find out in the future, I really can’t wait I need more to come!