Bodysuit 23 Hiatus #8

Web Novel Update: Word count has been on the low end this week. Only been managing roughly 1.5-sub 2k words. Also had some issues with trying to write the section I’m currently working on. Plus side: I think I got it figured out. Only issue now is it seems like what was originally going to be the final chapter is now the penultimate chapter. Certain characters attitudes toward certain situations are playing out differently that I originally had in mind, but overall I think it’s for the better. Now instead of trying to shove these ideas that don’t super fit well together into one chapter, they’ll be split into two separate chapters to allow for breathing room. Hopefully I’ll still finish in time!

I also updated the final chapter for the week over on Honeyfeed, so now you can read this week’s updates in one go: https://www.honeyfeed.fm/novels/3564

 

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  1. Mask says:

    I love that dress ! I hope to see that in the story !!!!

  2. LESpangle says:

    tipsy i see

  3. Akirathefox says:

    I need a story of how he ends like this

  4. Jimmy in white says:

    Resistance test to alcohol. To bad he is still a light weight.

  5. Sophia says:

    Do you have a deadline in mind? (Like by this date, the series will end!!) so i can mentally prepare myself for the inevitable and seek closure.

    1. Felix says:

      You might be missunderstanding the post above. They are talking about the novel on honeyfeed not BS23.

    2. Patricia Barton says:

      If you mean the web novel it has to be completed by September 5th with no additional editing allowed. I’m trying to get it done prior to that.
      As for B23, idunno.

  6. CommandoNX says:

    Date successful

  7. Sam says:

    Is bs23 ending?

    1. E says:

      No, this is the web novel that he’s working on for the hiatus that’s close to ending. The B23 Comic will resume soon.

  8. Bernhard Ernst says:

    What if someone opposite the road sees him take off the mask in the doorway? There must be a couple of houses in line of sight because of the intersection.